Buick Lucern - Lowrider

[Claussen]

Hey everyone!
This just started out as a quickie, but then i realised its potential, and carried on a little further, i know the paints sorta ******, but i liked the colour..
Original...
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6703/buicklucerneoriginalmv8.th.jpg (http://img440.imageshack.us/my.php?image=buicklucerneoriginalmv8.jpg)
Chop...
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6922/buicklucernechopjl1.th.jpg (http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=buicklucernechopjl1.jpg)
Its just a quick one, ill let you decide wether i should continue!

Update!..
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3558/buicklucernechopcopycopzw5.th.jpg (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=buicklucernechopcopycopzw5.jpg)
Just a couple little things done, just wanted to give me a nice desktop

[Reckoner]

I like it! You should carry on. The paint DOES look wierd

[essex boy luke]

wow that paints bright looks cool tho i like it good job
bit off topic but i see F*cked wasn't all 'bleeped' out as in ******

[Claussen]

Quick update for everyone
Thanks for the replies guys

[OooGummies]

Background looks a bit... dull. But I like the color, although its oversaturated it doesnt really matter... i love green. Good work.

[TBURG]

Not much to love about this chop.
The paint is horid.
The windsheild should be a bit lower.
Car is far too low.
Needs shadows.
Rear decal is out of perspective.
Not a very nice background.
Other than that............just keep on practising and you will eventually be happy with your efforts.
Everyone starts somewhere.:)

[essex boy luke]

Not much to love about this chop.
The paint is horid.
Car is far too low.
Not a very nice background.

see i have a problem with these type of comments
the paint is horrid and the car is far to low is an opinion its not helping state why you think these things are horid or not very nice
and its photoshop anyone can have there car as low as they like.
and i think you need some shadows under the wheel arches

[branden]

i would suggest you add some reflections to the paint, just to give it a glossy look and also maybe take away some of the "noise" on the paint. looks good so far though.

[Claussen]

thanks for the comments guys, sept tburg?
"The paint is horid.
The windsheild should be a bit lower.
Car is far too low.
Needs shadows.
Rear decal is out of perspective."

The paint is candy lime green, whats not to like?
Why would the windshield be lower?
Car is a lowrider.. The point is to kinda.. be a lowriding car (airbags anyone? hydros perhaps?)
Theres shadows all benethe the car, isnt there?
Rear "decal" is pinstripe, and is suppssed to look exactly as i put it on the car?

"just keep on practising and you will eventually be happy with your efforts."
Everyone, execpt for you is happy with the results, this isnt to serious of a chop, i just wanted a desktop man, thats what i got.
I don't know if you were posting yur opinions or what, but they dont all have to be negative

[TBURG]

Gee, sorry if I hurt your feelings.
I could have just lied and told you it was a great chop.
I have had chops cut-up too and if you don't want to hear negatives as well as positives then don't post them.

[essex boy luke]

Gee, sorry if I hurt your feelings.
I could have just lied and told you it was a great chop.
I have had chops cut-up too and if you don't want to hear negatives as well as positives then don't post them.
but dude your opinion doesn't matter hes asking how he can improve hes chop not how to improve it so you like it more.