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GimpChoppa
04-20-2008, 08:41 PM
Lots of small detail in this one. C & C appreciated.
Originals.
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/3258/audibackgroundkv1.th.jpg (http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=audibackgroundkv1.jpg)

My work.
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/8116/twinturboaudibacked5darwx3.jpg
By Gimpchoppa (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/choppastyle) at 2008-04-20

Hi res.
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/8116/twinturboaudibacked5darwx3.th.jpg (http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=twinturboaudibacked5darwx3.jpg)

PSDavinci
04-21-2008, 12:44 AM
Your really showing some advanced skills and incorporating alot of additional elements in your chops. This is good because the majority of choppers never progress past the basics.
And for most thats all they care to do, so thats cool.
I think you are going to prove to be different.
Having said that, you must realize that moving beyond the norm will also bring a different level of critique. That is where the bad comes in.
Dont get me wrong I like the chop very much, the car is a good donor - very shiny, the rims are nice, the underside bonnet mirrors and reflections are a neat touch, good job on the street scene too.
Unfortunately it really works against the chop. The reflections on the car are too obviously wrong, the BG sky and particularly its colors are not evident, nor are any of the buildings.
The glow is way off. The back side of the rim, caliper/rotor, tiretread all should be either illuminated or silhouetted not obstructed by the light, that is unlesss you have a fog machine down there too.
I like your style and I like your vision, my best suggestion here is "dont jump the gun".
Its a mistake that we all make, and believe me I have been guilty of this myself many times. These things take time and you get tired and anxious and bored etc., but once you post theres no going back.
Yeah, yeah we say c & c please, or let me know what you think, but in all honesty we only crave praise and admonishment.
C & c is not what its cracked up to be.
In reality there is no such thing as a perfect chop. But the better you get, the harder it should be to find the flaws.

The point im tryin to make is when you get to a certain point, you should not overlook obvious mistakes.
I think your at that point bro. :D

zocc
04-21-2008, 02:29 AM
Great job, i like it.Keep it up.

Murcie_LP640
04-21-2008, 04:05 AM
Without getting to the nitty-gritty, it looks good...however:

The reflection on the car looks different to what your background is
I dont really see any evidence of brakes, and there's white in between the spokes where you forgot to finish the job. It's a two-second job you can't really make mistakes like that.

The mirrors on the underside on the hood, look ok, but it doesn't really have a sheen like a mirror should, it just looks flat and 2D like you just copied and pasted bits of the engine onto specific spots, probably because you did.

On the plus side, the bodykit looks great, I'm not into that sort of thing because it exceeds my limits, but what you did with it was perfect. The rims look awesome as well, they look real. In comparison some of my chops tend to lose some depth in the back wheel, but that looks great.

Overall, I give you 7/10 :)

zocc
04-21-2008, 05:26 AM
Without getting to the nitty-gritty, it looks good...however:

The reflection on the car looks different to what your background is
I dont really see any evidence of brakes, and there's white in between the spokes where you forgot to finish the job. It's a two-second job you can't really make mistakes like that.

The mirrors on the underside on the hood, look ok, but it doesn't really have a sheen like a mirror should, it just looks flat and 2D like you just copied and pasted bits of the engine onto specific spots, probably because you did.

On the plus side, the bodykit looks great, I'm not into that sort of thing because it exceeds my limits, but what you did with it was perfect. The rims look awesome as well, they look real. In comparison some of my chops tend to lose some depth in the back wheel, but that looks great.

Overall, I give you 7/10 :)

There r brakes look closer.:cool:

lowkey
04-22-2008, 11:35 AM
great job gimp, davinci and the other guys has already pointed out the flaws.once again.great job bro.

GimpChoppa
04-30-2008, 07:26 PM
Thanx for the positive feedback guys. I'm still a newb, but I'm getting there.

Dj Twinkles
05-01-2008, 04:17 AM
dont be modest Gimp you no noob... the car's very nyc... just the neons that messed it up.. Background work amazing