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Texas16
06-09-2009, 08:00 AM
This is my latest! ;)

Original!
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa39/TheJoint17/Volkswagen-Scirocco_R_2010_1600x120.jpg

Chop!
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa39/TheJoint17/Scirocco-R.jpg

C&C please ;D

unique
06-09-2009, 08:37 AM
You have one big problem here, the car looks like its moving and the background isn't, make the car so you can see it clearly and use your effects that you used to make it look like its moving, on the background because here it just looks like a car speeding while it is stopped :S also have a little bit of nice dark Grey smoke out the back, that would top it off, so just make sure that you make the background blurred to what ever extent you want, and make sure the car body is completely clear, but very ncie on the wheels and rims, overall this is a good chop, keep em coming :)

Texas16
06-09-2009, 08:54 AM
Thank you, i will change the background, and post a new image with new BG :)

LPChopperz
06-09-2009, 09:08 AM
I think if you close the front lights it will be nicer and change the BG!

Texas16
06-09-2009, 09:44 AM
With new BG!
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa39/TheJoint17/SciroccoR.jpg

S_I_N_i_C
06-09-2009, 11:21 AM
looks cool but it still looks off. i would blur the background even more to make it look like its haulin!
the car looks good but the falmes? look a little toony, good wheel placement.

IgorDesign
06-09-2009, 01:53 PM
Nice chop man, but background needs changing.
I smabeled across this one, it's not at the same angle but maybe you can make it work as a background.
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/2370/drift453867.jpg

chopperkidd44
06-09-2009, 01:54 PM
you've got the right idea on the moving effects. they're a little off but again the issue here is that the background isn't moving. the best photoshops i've typically seen have light effects, spinning wheels, and moving backgrounds only. just a tip there.

keep it up!

Texas16
06-09-2009, 02:28 PM
Thank you, i will do better on my next chop, working on one now :)