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mostafa_tommy2002
06-21-2009, 06:18 PM
Original:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3658/3648595170_f0ea9344fb.jpg?v=0


CHOP:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3387/3647778605_9d3bfcbdf5_b.jpg

kennykro
06-21-2009, 06:42 PM
shadows aren't dark enough , tires look very c+p (jaggies), reflections are too extreme on the sides (could just be me), no reflections on the front fender, fb looks a little jagged in some spots, where is the vent on the right side, lots of camber on the rear tire (could be me).

Keep working, you'll get this stuff figured out yet.

LPChopperz
06-22-2009, 12:57 AM
Do more practice man! Also the right vent should be a little on the left side too! Anw take your time as Kenny said!

unique
06-22-2009, 02:51 AM
The back tire, the camber is so extreme that it is making the rim look flat.. and the wheel is coming off the original tire, the shadows are also to light, for example the vent on the bonnet, the the windscreen you can still see the windows from the old BG, there is only 1 vent on the front bumper for some reason ?? too much reflection on the roof from the old BG, i think ill stop there, but be careful with your selections and i also think maby you should stick to basic things for now, nothing to complicated, the trick is, mastering the basics then gradually moving on to things like "brushing, moving the car to a different BG etc" at the moment there is no shadow under the car.. I'm sorry to be so negative but its only to help you out :)