Deep Dish Rims

[AzZzA]

hey guys can you help me pls here is deep dish rims but it dnt look good lol how do i improve :P
thanks guys :D

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/8305/deepdish.gif

[boroboyben]

This should be under Photoshop questions. This section is for 'Chops in progress'

[AzZzA]

ok sorry