VW Polo chop

[justiceh2o]

What do you guys think of this polo?

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/9607/vwpolomod.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/i/vwpolomod.jpg/)

[AzZzA]

is this tommys bro?

[kennykro]

I don't want to be mean, but take you time and read what people tell you. watch your shadows, you don't have to put paint on every single thing you make. the mesh looks big and horribly 2D. I can't even properly critique it because it is a low resolution.

[fattack]

lowrider slow ya roll and be nice dude this dude is trying BUT!

you need to start listening to advice your given dude, you did the reliant robin...we (especially me) gave you some pointers and looking at this you didnt listen which concerns me...

Again the mesh is over the top and you havn't put shadows on (which i said was a major downfall for you and you should work on it) and its the same under the vehicle.

In all seriousness fella i and other members will gladly comment and try to help you...but if you ill not listen and encorporate what your told in your work you are going to find none of us will be willing to help you in the future

[justiceh2o]

is this tommys bro?


Cant say i know any tommy .

Just a little update on the image i have added a HUD.

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9607/vwpolomod.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/vwpolomod.jpg/)

[BadBlood]

what do i think of it ???..................not much

wheels are flat
theres no door lines , well , not much of them
window ref looks like bitumen
it looks like you have used brightness on the whole car and now it looks all pastey
theres no shadow under the car

the only thing that i can pick out that you did right was showing the bg through the passenger window


like we say for every noob that does this , dont go crazy and try to change the whole car up , just start slow and start perfecting your wheel changes , shaving door handles , colour changes etc ..... , then start moving onto more complicated stuff , you arent going to get good comments when you go nuts like this , when we see a noob who has only done a small amount on a chop and has done a neat job of it , then we are like hey this kid kinda knows what he is doing

and dont put the original car in the corners of your chop , its very distracting and looks bad

[justiceh2o]

OK i have tried to add some shadow and fixed the mesh a little.

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/6024/vwpoloupdate.jpg (http://img246.imageshack.us/i/vwpoloupdate.jpg/)

[fattack]

better! still need to work on it though, look at your light and how it falls on the car then add shadow accordingly, next you should work on your rims.

1) DONT USE THE SAME RIM TWICE!
2) use bigger donors this will stop your rims going flat (like your rear one)
3) use rims from cars otherwise you get no brakes...hows the car gonna stop ;)

[justiceh2o]

OK i get what you mean with the wheels going flat and havin no brakes

[cedjr007]

do you brush your fb or copy looks brushed and if so thats some nice brush work
the other thing fattack forgot to tell you is to select wheels from a car the same angle as your car. Carandmodel.com have good donors and google searches are the best if you type the right thing. keep em coming you have potential cus my first chops where similiar but instead of bashing U NOOBS advice like i was given brought me a long way.

[justiceh2o]

do you brush your fb or copy looks brushed and if so thats some nice brush work
the other thing fattack forgot to tell you is to select wheels from a car the same angle as your car. Carandmodel.com have good donors and google searches are the best if you type the right thing. keep em coming you have potential cus my first chops where similiar but instead of bashing U NOOBS advice like i was given brought me a long way.

The bumper was a c+p job and thanks for the site i will check it out on my next mod start a fresh and really take my time i think.

[fattack]

and i would like to point out we still bash honda even now :D but he secretly loves it

[cedjr007]

LMAO but i sucked a whole lot worst than justice ever did

[fattack]

Please do not post inappropriate pictures.

-management

[fattack]

how long until admin come in and give me a kicking for this lmao :P

[blackace]

Fattack thats freaking awesome dude, honestly Loling for about 15 minutes :D

[fattack]

can always count on me for some comedy ace ;)

[fattack]

^^^sorry mike it was just to funny to pass up and im sure you had a secret giggle to yourself :D

[blackace]

lolz fattack's been naughty! we are very ashamed of you fattack, tut tut tut (still funny as f*ck tho :D )

[BadBlood]

ohhhhh i wanna seee

[fattack]

it was amusing bt i will pm you the pic :D

[BadBlood]

i now understand , im going to email that to everyone , EVERYONE!!

[fattack]

hahha i thought it was a moment of awesomness from me :) but of course thinking about it putting it on the forum may have been a bad idea and mike spanked my tender rump *** for it lmao

[BadBlood]

hahaha , chump!

[Mike Minnillo]

not gonna lie, it was pretty funny. but keep that kind of stuff to PMs.

[fattack]

i will do dude my bad i apologise

[blackace]

Naughty boy Fattack, tut tut tut :D

[Mike Minnillo]

as a matter of fact, could you PM the pic that i removed from the thread?

[blackace]

lolz, the Mod even found it funny :D

[Mike Minnillo]

i may be a mod, but i still have a sense of humor ;)

[AzZzA]

lol, blackace nice sig mate :D