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Rafix
03-15-2010, 03:02 PM
I can see my brushing skills are becoming better! :D I think my skills got better, because i missed photochoping. :)
This car i made in 4 days. All is brushed except rims, no too good to brush rims. :( Don't critic about lines, because my line tool was too big for image and i needed to brush the lines. It was hard. :( C&C welcome!
Original:
http://i678.photobucket.com/albums/vv146/Rafixs/nissan-300zx-fairlady-z.jpg

New nissan 300zx:
http://i678.photobucket.com/albums/vv146/Rafixs/Nissan300zx.jpg
Love the outcome! :whoo:

kennykro
03-15-2010, 03:16 PM
I am really impressed with this.

chopperkidd44
03-15-2010, 03:38 PM
Lots of messy brushing. Theres jagged egdes in the rear, the tailights aren't finished. The wheels are both way off and there is no shadow under the car. Windows could've been fine with the original.

At this point i think you should slow down where you are. Not trying to rip this apart but to truely learn brushing is to start smaller, learn overbrushing and brush from reference cuz this is really toony and poorly executed. Perfect vents and simple side skirts. Perfect is the emphasis there.

Keep it up dude! :)

ebtbird
03-15-2010, 04:35 PM
I agree with chopperkid. It's not that it looks bad, it just could be a lot better. I'm not an expert at brushing, but I have gotten better by just slowing down. Like he said, start with smaller simpler parts and get really good at those. Then work your way up. I can see you have some really good ideas, just not quite the skill to execute them yet. But keep it up! You have improved a lot since you started.

Rafix
03-15-2010, 06:33 PM
Thanks for critic. Yea, i will do small if that's better. Better needed to put this in toon section, i think. :) Cheers mateys! :D

white_lancer
03-22-2010, 07:58 AM
welll you definately have improved that's for sure! and yes listen to the guys here they will give good advice. so just keep practicing.

should be in toons section

mglavina
03-23-2010, 01:36 AM
Tecktonik? Or did you just randomally decide to use the logo?

I like the chop.

ricx53
03-23-2010, 10:26 AM
i like it too! sorry guys, but we wont see rafix for few weeks, because his PC was R.I.Ped

steve7680768
03-29-2010, 01:37 AM
Really cool dear..

Rafix
04-02-2010, 06:35 PM
I'm back. Thank's for C&C. This tecktonik logo all is made by me, with my name. I like tectonik dance and can dance it two. Cool, with big C dog. :D