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SirSuspended
02-09-2004, 12:28 AM
yeah its a little rough at some places...this was my first widebody and i know it sucks. comments/criticism?

http://www.driftray.net/upload/where/mini.jpg

"widebody"
eyelids
cf
flares
deepdish
side skirt extended
bumper extended
tint



Last edited by sbiggie10 at Feb 8 2004, 10:29 PM
dreamv2.0
02-09-2004, 01:53 AM
the black line is a little too thick on the widebody it should be more shadow less black from this angle but it looks good anyways
hav_lova
02-09-2004, 03:08 AM
the back rim looks like its moving
loserasswipe
02-09-2004, 03:21 AM
back rim didnt come out quite right...and the carbon eyelids make it look like it took a fatty blunt to straight to the dome....
terazzi
02-09-2004, 05:05 AM
sbiggie10 I don't like the mini so, the arches look good :)
fattie64
02-09-2004, 07:26 AM
good chop man.....i dont know squat about widebodys but that looks like the door is inflating on first glance. love the "eyelids"; makes it look like its rolling its eyes :P
rickysals
02-09-2004, 12:15 PM
The first guy who does the deepdish right. People angle the reflections towards the center, which is WRONG. He did ihs parallel with the ground inwards which was perfect... one gripe... if ther is a 3 inch lip and the tire is still like 6 inches wide... doesn't that look a bit odd? I would make the tire wider to emphasize the deep dish effect. Maybe a very small lip on the front too so the rims match.
dreamv2.0
02-09-2004, 04:29 PM
his only prob with that rim is when he smudged it he did it with 100 % smudge next time try something like 50 that way it doesnt seem so transparent
misterphotoshop
02-09-2004, 04:38 PM
not bad..

line is way to thick and u just got to clean it up a bit imo...
Uncrules05
02-09-2004, 05:35 PM
Im sick of people using the burn tool to make a widebody. But it came out all right. The cf is too light, and its not supposed to cover the whole front end.
SirSuspended
02-09-2004, 06:18 PM
Originally posted by nogod666@Feb 9 2004, 02:29 PM
his only prob with that rim is when he smudged it he did it with 100 % smudge next time try something like 50 that way it doesnt seem so transparent
actually i didnt smudge it at all. i selected the rim and copied it, then used a motion blur then pasted the rim back on the way i wanted it.

and also uncrules i didnt use the burn tool on this chop, the airbursh was used for the actual widebody and the smudge was used for the flares

and thanks for the comments guys