Focus Cartooning

[digitalh2o]

c&c please. WIP!
http://img77.photobucket.com/albums/v235/digitalh2o/focus.jpg

[brasher]

looks ok, try making your lines smaller if you are using the line tool, it seems to jagged around the wheels. Even better would be to use the pen tool, it takes a bit of getting used to but the results are 100 times better.

[suprachopper1128]

looks good except for the tires. they're way off. the rest is pretty nice though.