Contest 22 Chop

[suprachopper1128]

hey, here's my chop for contest 22. this thing took 137 layers, and about 15-20 hours worth of choppin. i'm happy with how it turned out, tell me what you think.
it's all brushed btw, except for the rims and brakes.
http://img61.exs.cx/img61/9833/contest-22-final.jpg

[Tony Riley]

Looks very Veilside Supra Ltd.'ish. which is a very good thing. I think this one is the best one I've seen so far for contest 22. The flaws I see are 1) that kinda undulated black portion over the fastback/trunk area, and over the windshield (very slight) 2) the wiggly sealant around the rear window (wish it was more straight) 3) The rims could've been darker.

I like this entry...go'on wit'cho bad self! :D

[brasher]

Good job there mate,

From what i can see it all looks good, the rims need a bit more contrast and changing of the levels IMO. And the targa top needs some shadow were it is starting to cover the seats.

But good job, keep it up.

[silentwarrior]

its really nice...but lines are jagged...plus the back of the car you've brushed looks wierd...it looks 2D...and and i agree with whatever brasher said about rims

[macrulz_2]

very nice! i just don't like the hatch back part but its a very good chop.
keep it up

[TwisTa]

Nice Mate..,.Very Well done...Keep up d gud work :D

[SavB18]

wow man, youve really come along... if im not mistaken you were new to this not to long ago.... great work

[terazzi]

That is sweet as hell, I know that u putted alot of work to this when it was posted in WIP section so..I like it :rolleyes: kinda what a car like that should like :) keep it up..you becomming better and better!!

[suprachopper1128]

Originally posted by pimpnsi@Aug 9 2004, 02:50 AM
wow man, youve really come along... if im not mistaken you were new to this not to long ago.... great work
lol, yeah, i was a newb not long ago. i think i'm finally gettin the hang of this whole brushing thing.

and terazzi: thanks man, but i never posted it in the wip section. didn't want to give away my ideas.

and sw: i think the lines are jagged from when i resized it. i'll try to fix it.

and redimpeller: i based the body kit off the abflug s900 supra, but i see what you're sayin with the veilside ltd. what do you mean by "undulated black portion over the fastback/trunk area"? i can't quite figure out what you're talking about.

[Tony Riley]

Its a very thin hint of a black line over the fastback it almost looks like dots. Do you see what I mean?

[joemomma95]

redimpeller is talking about where the body meets the bg, there's a slight hint of a darker colored line in between the 2.

Also, take a look at the passenger side interior door panel, see how it sticks out into the interior a little? Now look at the drivers side, next to the rear side window...looks flat, give it a little shadow and a highlight and it'll look alot better. Maybe add some depth to around the window there too..

As I said before, everything looks good, glad to see you got everything sorted out..body looks great ;) ..

[suprachopper1128]

now i get what you guys are saying. i'll try to fix those. right now, i'm having some major comp troubles.

[suprachopper1128]

alright, i think i fixed most of the kinks. i think now the rims are too dark, though :ph34r:.
http://img26.exs.cx/img26/3987/contest-22-final2.jpg

[macrulz_2]

u are sooooooooooooooo good. the thing i like the most is the vents....they are sooo nice. how did u do them. keep it up. :o

[suprachopper1128]

well, when i was first learning to make them, i used joe's tut. after i got some experience with them, that's how they turned out. practice makes perfect.

any more comments? i like your avatar btw, mac.