My Try To Make A Magazine

[darkrider]

http://img58.exs.cx/img58/535/magazine.jpg

[Tulikettu]

Looks nice but I wouldn't buy it :D

[darkrider]

Originally posted by Tulikettu@Aug 9 2004, 09:15 AM
Looks nice but I wouldn't buy it :D
why not
language or u dont like the cars or ???

[misterphotoshop]

nice but i also wouldnt buy it partly bcuz i dont know the language and its not that appealing but nice try

[brian_is_metal]

The fonts are ugly and played out. But...I'd buy it, to support a brotha (send a translator with it though). Change the fonts, and you're solid.

[Tulikettu]

Originally posted by darkrider+Aug 9 2004, 05:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (darkrider @ Aug 9 2004, 05:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Tulikettu@Aug 9 2004, 09:15 AM
Looks nice but I wouldn&#39;t buy it :D
why not
language or u dont like the cars or ??? [/b][/quote]
Because those SUV&#39;s and the language, that Camaro is all I like in the cover. It&#39;s missing something that I can&#39;t tell what it is.

[The Fighting Panda Man]

hahaha, the AMERICAN car mag is in GERMAN, HAHAHA

[killercamaro]

i would buy it for only 1 reason. the article on the 2007 Camaro. and i&#39;d get my mom to translate it. i do like the 69 on the cover though.

[CkretAjint]

Here is my 2 cents on it...

There is no focal point. Your eye is forced to dart all over the cover between odd looking fonts, and different pictures. Go look at several magazines, there are normally 3 images on the cover, if that. A main image, which normally is the main spread in the magazine. A smaller image, often another main article within the Image. And more often then not, some REALLY hot looking girl.

* Black as a background color is a bad idea. It make everything look small and crammed. Black looks better on large women then magazine covers :P

* Also your headers / topics, do not really have any MAJOR difference in size between them. They all look the same with a qwick glance (even though I cannot read them). Try making the size large for important articles, and small for &#39;filler articles.&#39;

* The Avalanche that is over lapping the 69 &#39;maro, that is a big no no. You should be able to see all the cars clearly.

* Also the truck with the neons, that is bad &#39;cause you can barely make out the truck.

* Personal preference: I would flush right the prices with the bar code, so they do not stick out like a sore thumb.

[blazinking]

sweet they should make one like it

[tarek2kool]

na man the trucks rock

[darkrider]

B) thnx for the C+C