The brits and their cars.. they allways tells us americans how much they love their own brands.. aston, jaguar, bentley, etc. Dude.. some of them is owned by american companies ;) anyways.. heres my Aston Martin Vanquish.. (defetnely a british word, is it a cross of a Van and a quiz?? aye? ;) )


http://img145.exs.cx/img145/7599/van...3rdjpeg0qa.jpg

on the front tire the selection is not right but you can fix that with the marquee tool and the grill and lights look like c/p it would look better if you darkened the windows but the rest looks good

thanks for the C&C.. :) i'll do an updated version that'll up in a minute..

C/P means..?? <_<

c/p means copy and paste

I forgot to mention the side skirt is a little messed up the vents aren&#39;t semetrical the roof slopes selection is mesed up your left side the selection is a little messed up but you now what they say you learn from your mistakes

Ok.. so i fixed what you mentioned.. :) errr.. some of it apparently.. ;)

http://img160.exs.cx/img160/2608/van...jpeg2ko.th.jpg

the front and back tire is alittle messed up ne everthing looks good I guess

Very nice drawing

r u gonna turn the opacity to zero when u submit it, cause u didnt really toon it, jus kinda drew a couple jagged ligns around the basic shape of the car?

Claussen whats your problem? does it hurt in your azzizzle? can bear someone else does better than you?? :huh: i did every line of the car... below is a proof&#33; :) now either say you&#39;re sorry or go away.. thank you.

http://img75.exs.cx/img75/6320/vanqu...ighjpeg8jl.jpg

Holy crap, that&#39;s awsome. I love how you left the original headlights.

thanks... :D i glad you like my work&#33; I needa practice my "wheel skill" all my toons have either CP wheels or some theres messed up like this Aston Martin :P

looks great, i have tried cartonning a few times but i can never get it right, the jagged wheels dont stand out, i didnt notice em until i read it in the replies so u dont really need to worry bout it that much

ahh ok.. :) thanks&#33; :P

I don&#39;t mean to be picky - but I have to agree with Claussen.
You&#39;ve got the beginnings of a great toon. When you paint it you&#39;ll be finished.
Check out some of toons I&#39;ve done and you&#39;ll see what I mean.
http://www.photochop.net/gallery/thu...s.php?album=17
My first toons looked like that - just done with the line tool. Then I learned how to use the pen tool in Illustrator (or Freehand). Now I do the outline in Illustrator (which look like yours - except you can get the curves exact) then I take it into Photoshop to paint them.
Don&#39;t get me wrong - you&#39;ve done a great job. I just wish someone had told me which programs or tools to use when I started.

i see what you mean, and im thankfull that you like my work. Your toons are superb. But i haven&#39;t realy learned to airbrush so i decided to go the easyway and just draw the lines of the car, and lower the opacaity. Illustrator, is that a free program. Its part of the Adobe Photoshop family ehh? :rolleyes:

Adobe Illustrator or Macromedia Freehand does the same thing.
Free? ... depends on your sources.

i got the Illustrator.. from my work.. aherm&#33; :rolleyes: i work as a graphic editor, im just not so used to doing cars... ;)

does someone owe someone an apoligy?
i didnt mean to sound harsh, i geuss XE-351 did put it a lil nicer...
but it just looked wierd cause i thought u were supossed to brush the skin of the car?