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Originally Posted by WildmanProductions
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In places I can see where you are coming from...but not as a whole
I don't agree. It does look like a very warped elise.
Unlike the rest of these rather poor (yes I said it) comments in this
thread, I can at least see the technical flaws inherent.
So.
-The car has underbody shading, yes. But still it doesn't look like it's in the
presented environment. The shading should be flush to the tarmac.
-I think the rim choice is poor. They came from a sunny environment
obviously.
-The wheels and their arches just don't seem fine tuned. That whole rear
wheel is lower than the front (and I can see this while buzzed on german
beer).
From a pure design standpoint, I don't think it's quite cohesive enough.
From personal opinion it looks very mix and match. That rear fender sticks
out the most though. That in itself is a ruining factor for this piece.
Practice makes perfect though, and for a first it's ok. There have
been worse attempts absolutely.
Repetition definitely is key.
TR