I'll give you some insight.
A friend of mine is in the DJ scene, is a DJ & does many club flyers. This sort of style is appropriate when done correctly. It's semi-blasphemous of me to say that but the fact is club-flyers, much like pizza-flyers, tend to break some rules of design to be effective. My advice is to look at these again and really analyze the readability of the type. That is key. If you can't read it, who gives a crap what the busy-ness looks like... it just turns into art. Some of your type choices leave alot to be desired in the readability department... but for as much crap that you crammed in there, there is balance to each piece and I think they could become useable with some tweaking.
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