Aston Martin Vanquish

Phillip · 12-26-2004, 07:13 PM

The brits and their cars.. they allways tells us americans how much they love their own brands.. aston, jaguar, bentley, etc. Dude.. some of them is owned by american companies

anyways.. heres my Aston Martin Vanquish.. (defetnely a british word, is it a cross of a Van and a quiz?? aye?

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Dan · 12-26-2004, 07:22 PM

on the front tire the selection is not right but you can fix that with the marquee tool and the grill and lights look like c/p it would look better if you darkened the windows but the rest looks good

Phillip · 12-26-2004, 07:26 PM

thanks for the C&C..

i'll do an updated version that'll up in a minute..

C/P means..?? <_<

Dan · 12-26-2004, 07:30 PM

c/p means copy and paste

Dan · 12-26-2004, 07:34 PM

I forgot to mention the side skirt is a little messed up the vents aren't semetrical the roof slopes selection is mesed up your left side the selection is a little messed up but you now what they say you learn from your mistakes

Phillip · 12-26-2004, 07:41 PM

Ok.. so i fixed what you mentioned..

errr.. some of it apparently..

Dan · 12-26-2004, 07:43 PM

the front and back tire is alittle messed up ne everthing looks good I guess

MUDi · 12-28-2004, 12:18 AM

Very nice drawing

Claussen · 12-28-2004, 01:13 AM

r u gonna turn the opacity to zero when u submit it, cause u didnt really toon it, jus kinda drew a couple jagged ligns around the basic shape of the car?

Phillip · 12-29-2004, 04:12 PM

Claussen whats your problem? does it hurt in your azzizzle? can bear someone else does better than you?? :huh: i did every line of the car... below is a proof!

now either say you're sorry or go away.. thank you.

Prototype · 12-30-2004, 07:43 PM

Holy crap, that's awsome. I love how you left the original headlights.

Phillip · 12-31-2004, 01:00 PM

thanks...

i glad you like my work! I needa practice my "wheel skill" all my toons have either CP wheels or some theres messed up like this Aston Martin :P

v8_king · 12-31-2004, 10:22 PM

looks great, i have tried cartonning a few times but i can never get it right, the jagged wheels dont stand out, i didnt notice em until i read it in the replies so u dont really need to worry bout it that much

Phillip · 01-01-2005, 11:17 AM

ahh ok..

thanks! :P

XE-351 · 01-02-2005, 05:22 AM

I don't mean to be picky - but I have to agree with Claussen.
You've got the beginnings of a great toon. When you paint it you'll be finished.
Check out some of toons I've done and you'll see what I mean.
http://www.photochop.net/gallery/thu...s.php?album=17
My first toons looked like that - just done with the line tool. Then I learned how to use the pen tool in Illustrator (or Freehand). Now I do the outline in Illustrator (which look like yours - except you can get the curves exact) then I take it into Photoshop to paint them.
Don't get me wrong - you've done a great job. I just wish someone had told me which programs or tools to use when I started.

Phillip · 01-02-2005, 07:12 AM

i see what you mean, and im thankfull that you like my work. Your toons are superb. But i haven't realy learned to airbrush so i decided to go the easyway and just draw the lines of the car, and lower the opacaity. Illustrator, is that a free program. Its part of the Adobe Photoshop family ehh?

XE-351 · 01-02-2005, 08:48 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Phillip@Jan 2 2005, 06:12 AM
Illustrator, is that a free program. Its part of the Adobe Photoshop family ehh?

Adobe Illustrator or Macromedia Freehand does the same thing.
Free? ... depends on your sources.

Phillip · 01-02-2005, 11:45 AM

i got the Illustrator.. from my work.. aherm!

i work as a graphic editor, im just not so used to doing cars...

Claussen · 01-10-2005, 09:53 PM

does someone owe someone an apoligy?
i didnt mean to sound harsh, i geuss XE-351 did put it a lil nicer...
but it just looked wierd cause i thought u were supossed to brush the skin of the car?