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Old 04-25-2007, 06:55 AM   #1
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This is my first ever cartoon

Ferrari F430 spider (original)


Ferrari F430 spider (Cartoon)


Still WIP, will add shading etc when i have the time and add them on here

C+C much appreciated
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Old 04-25-2007, 07:45 AM   #2
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your lines are really bad
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Old 04-25-2007, 12:55 PM   #3
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you lines need work, and you should also work on varying the colors some. flat yellow just isnt cutting it.
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way better than my first
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not bad, i think it would look better if it was more... orange.
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pl here are some tips because i see a white halo around the lines. either u have put the color on the same lines layer (which i hope you didnt). hopefully if you havent, seems like u used the magic wand to select areas. when you do that make sure to expand the selection by about half the line width to remove teh white antialiasing of the line.

oh and as i tell everyone that is now learnin to toon or starting photoshop, learn to use the pen tool, it will be your best friend
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