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Old 04-09-2010, 01:45 PM   #1
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Old 04-09-2010, 02:47 PM   #2
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You have much to learn, but thats a good start my friend cheers!
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Old 04-09-2010, 02:57 PM   #3
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Right. The color change edges are super choppy, you used the same wheel twice and its too bright, where you removed the rear door line is smudgy, the rear fender is screwed up, the seats aren't realistic, the side vent is super choppy and off angle, the mesh is too dark, and you didn't get rid of the 'netcarshow.com' tags. Not b****ing, but you wanted comments. Keep working though. You have great ideas.
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Old 04-09-2010, 03:10 PM   #4
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For a first try, its a good start. To help with the "constructive" criticism...the choppy edges can be resolved by adding a feather of about .3 to you selections. Not sure how you make you selections, but when I do them using the pen tool, there is an option after you choose to "make selection" for inputting the feather. That will help a lot. For the best result you should start with a base that has at least 1600x1200 resolution. As for the interior, your seats are a bit bright...the contrast seems ok because it does look like they are behind glass, but the darkness of the seats doesnt match the existing interior around them. Also, they seem a bit large for the car. As for the wheels, using the same wheel 2x is a no no. Looking closely you see that the rear looks flat after distorting it to match the shape it should be. I've done this before and fixed it, but that requires a bit of brushing...when I was done it was pretty much a brand new wheel.

All of the mistakes are very common for beginners so no worries. You should some tutorials and you will learn some nifty tricks (in fact I think there are many hosted on this forum).

Oh lastly, when you make a 2 door conversion its best to extend the door line so the proportions of the car look right. As it the back window is much too large.

Keep it up, you will get there...Everybody started where you're at now.
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He just stated and you critic so hard like he's in PS bizz for a year. It will be lucky if he will come back.
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Wtf is that all about? They're trying to help him. He asked for help. My word... heaven forbid some try and help you! You might never come back!
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Old 04-19-2010, 02:44 PM   #7
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Relax guys,I'm not offended or hurt by your comments.In fact there very useful for me because i now know what to change.10x for your attention.I didn't say that this is my first chop or something like that.It's my first go with PS CS3(I've worked before with PS 7.0 and i have a chop published somewhere around here-It's a Subaru Impreza again but it's an older version).And i don't do chops because I want to be a pro,I do them for fun and kill free time.
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