is 200 toon

[astra_gte]

here is my first toon ive done in a long time and im hoping that i will couler this one my self
so here it is tell me what u think and what i can do to improve


will update regualy

[firefly]

lookin' nice but may i suggest that u take a lil' more time when outlining?
most of the lines are very jaggedy :/

[suzq044]

i aggree, but it is a pain tooning in photoshop, i do the lines in Flash or illustrator, to get that smooth and then bring it into photoshop to airbrush, if i feel like it. Otherwise i keep it in flash.

[Prototype]

Those choppy lines arent working for me. TAry spending more time selecting things. Otherwise, its a very good start.