.:Porsche Carrera GT Toon:.

[.:ace:.]

Well heres my latest and second toon!

it took about 10-15 hours and i was using my new wacom tablet! (first major project)

ORIGINAL: http://www.desktopmachine.com/framep...832&size=w1920

WIRE FRAME:


TOON:


This is the wip tread: http://www.photoshopchop.com/forum/s...ad.php?t=20297

Id love to know what you think?


thanks .:ace:.

[rickysals]

i'm interested to see the wireframe.

looks nice

[.:ace:.]

there you go ricky! enjoi!

[Cali-Z]

Your work is a great inspiration to me. Keep up the awesome work.

[.:ace:.]

i saw your 240z toon! its a good start|! just need some sorting out! but im glad im an inspiration!

[Tony Riley]

I received your PM a little late apparently - so my apologies.

It looks very good. And you say you are using a tablet. It looks
like its helping you out. The image choice is very nice. The level
of detail is nice.

However, your problems lie with some of the rough and jagged edges
in certain portions of the car. They aren't very visible when you resize
but they really stick out at 1920x1200. Personally I think the line size is
a tad thick for this kind of detail. With lines this thick I would have liked
the image to appear more "fake" - more "toony". The thicker outline is fine
though...I'm not scrutinizing that because usually it will always work.
It is tooned pretty well, especially considering it is a second toon. Keep
it up.

[OmicroN]

Originally Posted by Tony Riley

I received your PM a little late apparently - so my apologies.

It looks very good. And you say you are using a tablet. It looks
like its helping you out. The image choice is very nice. The level
of detail is nice.

However, your problems lie with some of the rough and jagged edges
in certain portions of the car. They aren't very visible when you resize
but they really stick out at 1920x1200. Personally I think the line size is
a tad thick for this kind of detail. With lines this thick I would have liked
the image to appear more "fake" - more "toony". The thicker outline is fine
though...I'm not scrutinizing that because usually it will always work.
It is tooned pretty well, especially considering it is a second toon. Keep
it up.

I agree...

The outlines on the hood for the emblem and the line below it are WAY too BOLD. For the interior the outlines for the windows are beyond WAY too BOLD, they stick out like a Camaro at a Mustang rally. Your outlines on the side of the car at too bold as well, maybe if you made some of these lines blend in a little better it would have a better overall appearance, but they are solid black lines on a smooth red surface, it's just not doing it any justice.

Make these updates and you will have top notch material here, great job on the paint.

[.:ace:.]

cheers for the comments guys! and thanks for the reply tony i realy appreiciate it!


im gotta do a battle chop atm but i will make the updates as soon as i can and ill post on here so! look out!