First try with brushing (need help)

[ecotec]

Hi, this is the first time that I try to brush a body kit. Then, I made a first try that is really simple but I know that there's a lot of hard line ! I simply wanna know some advice to make it look more realistic !
(This is really not finish but I don't want to get farter without knowing how lol)
Your help will be so much appreciated!!

Original :


New bumper only :


P.S. KEEP IN MIND THAT THIS IS A WIP AND THERE'S NO FINAL TOUCH lol ! I simply want advice, or to know if you think i'm really bad

[TechChild]

use a smaller mesh pattern. and you should have lowered it a bit more so the front bumper dosent look so stretched.

[ecotec]

Thank you Techchild! I simply want to let you know that the mesh grill is not the one that I'll use! I'm searching for some good thing to put in! Your lowering advice help it a lot to look better lol I don't know why I didn't do it first (I do it usually lol)
(Picture Updated)
So don't look at the mesh grill lol

[Carty]

looks good, but your lines are slighty jagged... they should be smooth for a more natural appearance, and you need more lighting effects