KRONIK KREATIONZ

Kronik · 09-19-2011, 05:41 AM

New to this site...pretty sure i'll get burned for my work, not really worthy of this site from what ive seen...just going to post 2 for the time being. i hope i did it right...
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Murcie_LP640 · 09-19-2011, 09:10 AM

These aren't too bad actually! The Volksy in particular has some pretty good design, just needs a few higher-res pieces for the execution - mainly the mesh.

As for the B-Class, there's a few jaggies here and there that need to be cleaned up, mainly on the front bumper, and I reckon there needs to be a bit more of a visible curve in the side vent so it fits in better with Merc's body design. Aside from that though that is also a pretty good chop.

Welcome to PSC and keep up the good work.

kennykro · 09-19-2011, 09:55 AM

I like the style.

The problem I have with the first one is the vents you put in, the edges on them look too "sharp". Not sure if that makes sense...

Second one's lights seem to bright, considering the ambient light in the area.

fattack · 09-19-2011, 11:13 AM

ARGHHHHH LENS FLARE OF DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! lol

the vw, dont use lens flare lest i keeeel thee! however i do quite like what u did to the merc

the points have already been made above so im not gonna repeat them

welcome to psc matey

mglavina · 09-20-2011, 10:45 AM

I like your rim choices on both your chops

nathstewart · 09-20-2011, 01:41 PM

Ideas 10/10, Overall exaction id have to give you a 8/10. youve got alot of talent i just get the feeling you didnt 100% commit yourself into them. As said above you rim choice is spot on and its nice to see your using high res images for doners. Only bit thats niggling me with the merc is the front lip. On the left side youve cut it flat to the wheel arch line where if it was real it would protrude out a bit more.

The Vw could use a little more work, i love the wheel arches they look great but the font bumper lacks reflections on the bottom half of the lip and im sorry but the lense flare has to go, thats a big no no among most of us here :P.

All in all great work and a very big welcome to PSC

BIGWORM_25 · 09-26-2011, 11:59 AM

Wish I could see these.

BIGWORM_25 · 09-29-2011, 01:43 AM

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Originally Posted by Murcie_LP640

These aren't too bad actually! The Volksy in particular has some pretty good design, just needs a few higher-res pieces for the execution - mainly the mesh.

As for the B-Class, there's a few jaggies here and there that need to be cleaned up, mainly on the front bumper, and I reckon there needs to be a bit more of a visible curve in the side vent so it fits in better with Merc's body design. Aside from that though that is also a pretty good chop.

Welcome to PSC and keep up the good work.

Pretty much sums up my critique as well.

Im a bit bigger fan of the MB.

*By the way...Thank you for fixing the problem I had viewing these.

Nice work.