another competition entry...

[4hero]

done quite a lot so far, but finishing touches still to do..



still learning!

[Zodi@c]

the dial on the screen looks off angle... rims look flat.. but i LOVE the bodywork

[4hero]

thanks mate, I see what you mean about the rims...

I will work on this and upload an updated version soon

[4hero]

I think I am almost finished, maybe some tweaks here and there to do.. what do you think???

C&C very welcome

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[4hero]

so bored waiting, I'm off to wash my ride ...

[samb0ritechere]

the left part of the lip shouldn't be curved like that since the driver's side isn't.

not feelin the new nose on that, especially on white.

the bottom of the car shouldn't be that bright, burn it up a lil

[Mikeh C]

bit dodgey next to the abt sign on the front? lol love what your doing maybe the inside of where the door closes is a bit flat to the body panels, try roundin the corner off a bit otherwise gr8

[4hero]

thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated!

Originally Posted by Exodiuz

the dial on the screen looks off angle... rims look flat.. but i LOVE the bodywork

changed the rims, and not sure about the dial being off angle..

Originally Posted by samb0ritechere

the left part of the lip shouldn't be curved like that since the driver's side isn't.

not feelin the new nose on that, especially on white.

the bottom of the car shouldn't be that bright, burn it up a lil

fixed a few things covered in your comments

Originally Posted by Mikeh C

bit dodgey next to the abt sign on the front? lol love what your doing maybe the inside of where the door closes is a bit flat to the body panels, try roundin the corner off a bit otherwise gr8

abt sign.. thanks for that, now sorted! Panels flat? I changed this a bit, better?

I really appreciate your feedback, what with being a noob 'n all that! cheers guys.

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