Challenger drift...

[BIGWORM_25]

For a competition on another site.Havent posted on here in a LOOOOOONG time but just lookin for c&c.Thanks for looking!!


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Once again...I havent posted anything in a while but I do view like everyday.You guys inspire me to keep going.Thanks for taking time to look.

[elmalfiso15]

I really like it but the front mesh is bothering me. Its the same mesh every time and the pattern is too big. Also the inter cooler looks out of place. I recommend adding pipes somewhere and depth.

[dipper94]

sseexxyy
the rear wheels isnt spinning fast enough to be drifting
i like your text
the selections around the arches could be cleaner
very nice, you should do well in the comp

[baggedminiz]

IDK, i like the mesh like that. For me, the wing kills that car. Also, i think the background lacks the element of motion and speed. Other than that, i think it looks sick as hell!

[PSDavinci]

Looks like the original is a chop.
I like what you have but heres my suggestions:
1) Re-do all the highlites. The deepened saturation made them too blue.
2) Add reflections to the side, its way too matte.
3) Move the number to the front of the door
4) Remove the decals at the top of the windshield
5) Add small decals along bottom rocker panel and front bumper.
6) Add some shading along the top of the mesh

[WhytBoi]

im only a noob, so dont take my word too seriously.... but here is what i noticed:
1-the color is a lil too bright
2-the rear tire looks like its sitting still
3-the front tire looks too thick
4-the spoiler looks a lil odd...(havnt exactly figured it out yet...)
5-shading is off in some places (tire should fade to black at the top; no shadow from the smoke)
6-there needs to be a lil bit more transition shading from the car to the background
(if you look closely at a picture, the images in the forground slightly blend into the background...)
7-and from a drifting fanatic, lol, the front tire shows its goin to crash into the camera....