bmw/vw chops (getting better)

[RichardB]

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how about some comments what did i do wrong or any tips to make them better

[t0tal]

The good stuff: CF hood on the Golf, rear wing on the BMW..
The hood could use a bit more contrast and maybe a tad of swirl or something to make it come alive, but it looks pretty nice as it is. The rims in the other hand are from a completely different angle and they show it. They are pretty uncentered and IMO a bit too big. Also the middle part colour is decent, but for some reason the lower part cf is too big and uncontrasty. Actually now that I look at it it looks good on the frontside of the front wheel, and gradually gets worse towards the rear of the car. I'm not too keen on stickers on these cars, but it's applied ok.
The colour on the BMW is a bit uncontrasty, and the lowering is a bit too much. Also you should apply some shadow on top of the wheels to create the effect that they're tucked. The van conversion is ok, and you've applied it to both sides of the car.
The tint on the windows is reasonable, althou you could leave the windshield untinted.
Hope I wasn't too harsh, just trying to give good criticism to help you improve your work!

[RichardB]

no thankyou much! see things like that help me learn lol. im working on a chevy colorado right now. having a hard time swapping bumpers an such.