My first attempt at a toon

[Pronova]

Be gentle I am a rookie but this is my first attempt at a toon, the top is my real car below it is the toon. I spent several hours working on it and It may not be like the top Dogs but I think it is a good start, Let me know what you all think

[PSDavinci]

Its a little rough there in spots yet Nova and looks like you didnt toon the tire and wheels.
I would suggest you remove the blacked out glass and show the interior, just make the shape and fill it. Then give a shot at tooning the tires/wheels. Also fix the rear of your ground shadow, its too squared off. I hope your working with alot larger of a picture.
Keep it goin man.

[Pronova]

Just rerally playing, I love the stuff that I see chopped and tooned and I know mine needs work, But also enjoying doing it, Thanks for not bashing me to bad, wheels and tires I did a bur too and also added disc brakes

[Pronova]

Second Work, A little better

[PSDavinci]

There you go bro !
Got some toonage going now.

[white_lancer]

yup definately an improvement good job! now that was not that hard right? time for the rims :P

[Pronova]

Here is rims done by me, didn't do tires
Anybody got any ideas to help me do tires