here is something i started the other day, someone suggested i do a car from nothing, so i did...this gave me a good reason to try and learn the pen tool....and so afr i like it
cheers, any pointers will be helpfull, keep in mind it is a WIP, and its about 65% done...
looks amazing, iwould just suggest an interior and a door, usually they both make a car alittle more enjoyable... just playing with you. as i said looks amazing.
ok now for what i actually think shoud be doen/fixed.
1. your line doun the middle of the hood should be curved down a little more at the front becuase it doesn't line up with the front end properly.
2. i'm asumong the wheels were put on there for reference, but if not you need to change the levels and i lloks like you went over the front wheel with the brush tool a little bit.
thanks for the bonnet thing, and i think ill make my own background ace...cheers
the wheels were only for reference..... when i showed a mate after id already done my empty shell, he gave me a base to work from (a litle late but its been helpful)
so yea, i will certainly be hunting for sexier rims!!!
1. the background makes it look like an RC car, dont know why
2. on the side of the car, where your have that pointed thing that comes off the vent it doesnt look like its attached to the car because it isnt quite shaded right
3. in the front on the bumper, there are a few spots that arent highlighted right, too much white
4. the side skirt is slight crooked, i think it would look better as either a straight edge or a smooth curve
5. it looks like its set up to be a mid engine super car, why not make the windshield a little bigger cause its really small right now, and the hood a little smaller
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ok, im trying out this bg, and i suck at bgs..... still gotta play with it some more....
will it be worth my effort???
No, the background sucks for a concept. I can help you with a background if you want. I noticed you used either the 2005 corvette or 2005 Solstice frame to build on with this car. Good choice, are you going to be making this realistic or just a "concept" rendering?
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