VIP Skyline Coupe

RattyMazda · 02-13-2008, 07:16 PM

This is me newest
i havent posted in a while
this was for a little msn comp me and a mate had goin
C&C Please

Org:

Chop:

Update:

neatened it up a bit

RattyMazda · 02-14-2008, 09:13 AM

40 veiws and no comments
come on people

Moncef · 02-14-2008, 10:07 AM

+Bodywork is fine
+Flat black paint = cool.
-Paint not dark enough, and not enough highlights even for flat.
-Rim lip reflections are wrong
-Some rough selections

You should probably resize your images so people don't have to scroll sideways to see a full picture.

Moncef

darkstar89103 · 02-14-2008, 11:36 AM

not bad but imo the back wheel looks a little small and the edges where you croped in the new background are a little pixelated. try feathering your lasso by 1 px it helps. other than that this chop is J F T.

Blaupunkt · 02-15-2008, 02:33 PM

im not sure wot i think..its a nice chop but not my kind of car :P whether thats relevant or not..and moncef why dont u just get a bigger screen xD i didnt need to side scroll haha =] only messing.

/michael

Kaotik · 02-16-2008, 02:28 AM

-it looks flat black in most places but on the bonnet there is too much reflection and on the rear quarter panel its waay too toony.
-the front wheel dish reflections look weird (almost like u forgot to finish em)

and IMHO i would say for a good VIP look try blacking out the surreound of the headlights or putting some demonic eyelids on it.
and thats my 2 cents.....good job bud, love the VIP concept

PSDavinci · 02-16-2008, 05:15 PM

Yeah some G35 action!

I like it bro but you got some funky lines there on the roof.

RattyMazda · 02-16-2008, 05:55 PM

Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PSDavinci · 02-16-2008, 08:15 PM

Nice fix CC.
On closer inspection I notice that your mesh on the far side of the bumper is off angle. Try to rotate it a bit to pull the left side up and right side down. Also the front of the car appears to be sitting on the pavement. You might add a slight shadow that rounds off just a bit this side of that far corner.
I assume your BG donor pic was a Car and Model specimen.
It would look far better without the logo and copywrite info and your signature there instead.

RattyMazda · 02-17-2008, 08:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PSDavinci

Nice fix CC.
On closer inspection I notice that your mesh on the far side of the bumper is off angle. Try to rotate it a bit to pull the left side up and right side down. Also the front of the car appears to be sitting on the pavement. You might add a slight shadow that rounds off just a bit this side of that far corner.
I assume your BG donor pic was a Car and Model specimen.
It would look far better without the logo and copywrite info and your signature there instead.

cheers for that man
i will deffo get ride of the Car and model logo and put me sig there

im just not sure how to do shadows, im guessin its pretty easy but i just havent found it out yet lol

PSDavinci · 02-17-2008, 12:18 PM

I guess there are several ways to shadow, but my favorite (and probably the easiest way) is to grab the lasso tool and select a feather setting from 3-5. Then on a layer below the car simply make a shape that follows the footprint of the car. In your case here, you could start at the left corner just almost touching that far bumper edge and continue your line just slightly off the bumper, all the way around the front of the car over to your front tire. At this point I would go back in just behind the lower edge of the tire and then follow the existing shadow line since it looks pretty good from that point on. Then at the back of the car when you curve back around behind the rear tire, run your line straight back to your starting point. Once you have your shape, fill it with black and then you can make opacity adjustments, use transform>distort or transform>warp for fine tune shape adjustment and the move tool for placement.
Play around with it some and you'll have it mastered in no time.

RattyMazda · 02-17-2008, 05:32 PM

cheers man
will try it when i have time
thanks

spida · 02-21-2008, 01:22 AM

cars lowered too much there is no shadows
the only things that look real are the parts you didnt touch
the grill is too light and too fake looking and is not angled right as said before
the paint looks like crap you got gloss/matt/toon in different places on the body
you put deep dished rims on a car that hasnt been widened
and ye you got a lot of work to do my friend