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09-04-2008, 01:49 PM
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I Love Mike
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Atlanta,GA
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Widebody tesla roadster
heres something im been trying to accomplish for a while a bodykit for the tesla ..... i was taking a from break Davanci's contest and came up this and i like it so far. needs a lil mo work but heres the finish product until im able to do some more work on it enjoy 
original: http://www.netcarshow.com/tesla/2008...llpaper_19.htm
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By cdd007 at 2008-09-04
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09-04-2008, 01:55 PM
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PSC 1000 POSTS MEMBER
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this should be a w.i.p.
its looking good,but it still needs some clean up.
it needs shadows,it looks like its floating.there is some weird hardlines near where the front tire meets the road.
also the line for the front fender,where it meets the door,
you should line it up with the original line ,or get rid of the original
great ideas,keep working on it bro
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09-04-2008, 01:56 PM
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Location: South Africa
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Nice idea mate but somr places are smudgy .. brushing needs more refs... the radial blur looks wrong you should've stuck to the standards.. some places are off colour... and dont be lazy...your selections jagged here and there dude...And front vent looks blurry
//Simply Street totally "pwns"
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09-04-2008, 02:11 PM
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I Love Mike
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yea it was quickie it took me to two hours to get it to this point
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09-04-2008, 02:18 PM
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Now finish it... it'll be a killer chop dude...
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09-04-2008, 03:31 PM
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ye finish it. i agree with the above. i look at it and read ur name and go :S "ouch dude whats up with you" kinda lol.
fix it and it'll be mint
good luck in the comps
/michael
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09-04-2008, 04:25 PM
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I Love Mike
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Atlanta,GA
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u guys have encouraged to give u an update by tomorrow only if i finish Davinci's comp chop
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09-04-2008, 06:33 PM
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Location: Aberdeen
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looks good but the roof/sunroof dosent look right
and also it looks like the driver is turning into the wall..... suicidal? :O maybe lol
and ur spoiler looks rather toony
i agree with SINIC it should be a W.I.P
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09-05-2008, 08:07 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Dallas, Texas
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I like it 007 but yeah it needs tweaking.
Carty hit on the most noticable flaw, the BG.
Try doing an Edit> Transform> Distort on it and pull up slightly on the bottom left corner. Use the road line to try to get the angle right.
Also throw a shadow under the car thats visable below the skirt and between the tires to address the floating issue.
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09-15-2008, 06:04 PM
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I Love Mike
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Atlanta,GA
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wow i would wanna be a away when the heavy hitters leave a comment this will become a long term project fellas especially now that school has started and my art class project take up what was my choping time. this and my civic vette will be complete around early 2009 i hope !!!
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