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CHOPS IN PROGRESS For all those unfinished chops. Try to keep things clean in the auto chop section and post all those works in progress right here. |
01-21-2007, 12:22 AM
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[MP] "Update 1" WIP Volvo C30
This is the car that I entered into the battle in the battle arena, but its not finished
First of all I plan on fixing up EVERYTHING that is wrong with this view
than I will be doing a front view and interior view
But this thread is for the back view
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I want to know absolutely everything that is wrong,bad or things that can be added to this chop
I want very harsh comments, because I don't want anything to be wrong with it
So if you want me to add more I.C.E tell me (also tell me what kind), If you want different rims tell me, if you want bits of blurriness fixed tell me... etc
Theres a high res link so you can point out blurry areas
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WIP 1
High Res Link:: http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4...ghtmare2ps.jpg
WIP 2
High Res Link:: http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7948/update1bd4.jpg
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Last edited by MartinPliksh; 01-27-2007 at 07:01 PM.
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01-21-2007, 01:37 AM
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needs more screens, and neons.... jkjk... looks perfect to me
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01-21-2007, 02:18 AM
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view the high res, and you will see the blurry areas
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01-21-2007, 02:53 AM
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looks great man, i personally like the taillights....
1.where the white interior meets the hatch area, very blurry, but that was abvious on the smaller pic...
2.make the inside screen darker due to lighting (but im sure you alread know that)
3.an also just above the bottom screen, left of the speakers..., theres an edge that could be a tiny (tiny) bit shaper...
4.and just where the far tailight is...., just rub out the bit o blueish glow that goes past the edge of the car...(unless you plan on doing a night time bg change)
5.ok, on the pillar edge (close one), above and beside the tailight ...the edge looks a bit sharp...
oh...and the vent edges look perfect....but in the smaller pic, they appear to be jaggered (a common problem)
i personally would be happy with it, (xept the 1st point)
i only pointed stuff out caus thats what u wanted, shes a really nice ice chop tho, good work, keep it up!!!
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01-21-2007, 03:37 AM
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my 2 cents
1. not absolutely sure but i think that the headrest that u can see just a bit of through the rear side window has enough showing that u should be able to see a screen there
2. on the rear end in the reflections u can see a car driving down the road with its headlights on and shining on the ground and first- its daytime so u wouldnt be able to see his headlights on the ground and second- based on your background there wouldn't be a road driving into a showroom quality cement floor
so i know i'm being nit picky but u asked for it otherwise excellent chop
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01-21-2007, 09:40 AM
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Actually the head rest shouldn't be there it seems the back seats were takin out for the I.C.E. so it shouldn't exsist in any window. Am I right or wrong??
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01-21-2007, 10:00 AM
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there seems to be no passenger seat??? so add that!
i agree with fatgoat on his blurryness points!
there is a red section on the rims and the the rear splitter loks toony! but looks gd just sort htis stuff!
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01-21-2007, 07:01 PM
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thanks everyone
I'll make sure to fix all the areas mentioned
-I think the red section on the rims is the reflections of the brake calipers, they where there on the original rims
There will be an update soon-ish
keep the C&C coming
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01-21-2007, 11:20 PM
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good spotting ollie, hmm, this is gunna be a really nice chop chop
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01-21-2007, 11:34 PM
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Do you have/can you do a version that doesn't have the multimedia/show car stuff on it? That would kick *** more than the current version you have.
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01-22-2007, 02:34 AM
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^ I've got an old WIP of it with no ICE, but its also missing many other things ---> http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7...nterior5gk.jpg
on the PSD file I merged a whole heap of layers because the file was way to big, and took my computer like 5 minutes to open
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01-22-2007, 03:27 AM
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thats the opnly trouble with psd file's once you start using over 50 layers they start t get a bit large! lol
its all fun tho!
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01-22-2007, 04:59 PM
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its not anything big, but your not gonna tint the windows?
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01-22-2007, 06:50 PM
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^ I can if you want, its not a very hard mod
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01-23-2007, 03:40 AM
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lol yer real difficult lol misterunderestimated this is suppose to be martins best chop and all you say is "you not gonna tint the windows?" lmao!
maybe consider cumming up with more constructive comments than that!
pliksh i think/hope that your gonna fix that rear splitter! because it sorta kills it! but im looking for an update soon so surprize me!
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01-23-2007, 01:01 PM
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^^^ Well, at least he posted a comment suggesting that he tint the windows, its better than saying nothing at all.
BTW- I think it would look really good with darker windows.
About the chop, I think the rear has too many vents in it. Maybe delete the vent by the tail light?
The part where it is really bright above the exhausts is kind of blurry and weird selections, maybe try to clean that up a bit.
I think a dark blue would suit the car nicely.
And the interior is a bit off angle.
Other than that it is great!
I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this chop so my respect goes to you.
Cheers,
D.C.C.
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01-23-2007, 01:33 PM
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First let me say it looks great, I'm hoping to get my chops to this level eventually.
The only thing that bugs me is the left "corner" of the hatch. If you look at the orginal shape of the hatch, and of the opening in the chop you'll notice that the corner of the hatch should be just a slight curve...almost a straight line. The right side of your hatch looks pretty good, but the left side has that reverse curve as if it's to clear the taillights.
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01-23-2007, 01:59 PM
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no, i know, i just think the tint could give it even more class. what the duck is wrong ace? oh, btw, i voted for his chop so dont give me any crap about this being his "best chop" and to comment more.
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01-23-2007, 07:43 PM
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thanks everyone for your comments, an Update will be done soon
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Originally Posted by Design Custom Cars
About the chop, I think the rear has too many vents in it. Maybe delete the vent by the tail light?
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I probably wont be deleting any vents, as I feel they fit all together
About the tinted windows, thanks for the suggestion, but I'm leaning towards not tinting them (I dont usually tint windows) But I may tint them
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01-27-2007, 07:04 PM
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UPDATE 1 is up (Check first post)
Again please tell me if anything is wrong with it
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