Peppus design.. Simply brushing... WIP

[Dj Twinkles]

I asked Peppus if I could use his line to practice my brushing skills... So go ahead tell me what you think of it keeping in mind Im a total noob to brushing... ok noobish

Peppus Design:
http://www.postimage.org/image.php?v=aV2u25rr

Brushing by me ...WIP 1 :


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[Dj Twinkles]

I dont think its that bad.. I kinda feel like I did a good job so far

[PatelDesigns]

Good start, would like to see more. Some lines are a bit jagged... work out the kinks.. keep it up.

[blackace]

dude thats really good work..... the light on the right is abit dodgy but stil good tho

[PSDavinci]

Yeah I think its lookin good so far bro.
Kind of early yet for too much evaluation.
Just remember to go in steps.
Dont get too carried away with the body work before laying down the base.
Fill the body, black in the vents, glass and tire fills.
Then begin detailing shadows and highlites.
There really is no set rules on this BUT if you tend to jump around it can really get confusing later on when you decide you want or need to chage something.
Is this going to be a total render?

[Dj Twinkles]

thanx guys.. @psd: nope just the body... gonna c+p the wheels and interior

[bennos]

good stuff. i can't brush but i'll still point out bits that are rough i can see. (you probably know anyway but still, i'm bored)

mmm, (when i say left, it'll be the cars left not your left ok...

left headlight top corner. left front spoiler, basically that whole corner has little bits that need to be smoothed out. the bottom line of the glass on all parts of the car need smoothing. right front spoiler vent there is a slight kink, right where the 2 yellows and black meet. where the roofline meets the a? pillar

better than i could ever do tho!