1st Brush ever

Dudee · 03-22-2005, 03:23 PM

well this is my 1st brush ever and actually my 1st brush ever i never even practiced before this 1, and in total this is my 4th chop i have ever done i know i need major practice on my rbushing but as i said its my 1st 1 ok i hope you like it,

lots of C&C

Dudee · 03-22-2005, 03:25 PM

and heere the original

Dudee · 03-22-2005, 05:40 PM

Update, list of mods

Color change
made crease in side vent (to let the door be able to open)
and vents on the side skirt

suzq044 · 03-22-2005, 08:06 PM

ok, you still need practice on the realism. Most of the issue is that you're using soft brushes & that the proportions are off (they're at the wrong angle etc).. good attempt though

--susan

Fugitive · 03-22-2005, 09:55 PM

haha to comment on the edition of the door creases... now you have 3 doors, if you look closely, you have the crease you added, thats the driver door, than you have the crease that came with the c/p thats the middle door that i guess is just show? then you have the 3rd crease, for the backseat.... interesting concept haha besides that its a good intro to brushing

brian_is_metal · 03-22-2005, 10:28 PM

Pretty decent for a noob chopper. As suzq said, the brushing is soft, making it look a little blurry. I think you rocked the c&p part of it though! Keep practicing, and you'll be awesome. Looks a lot better than what some seasoned choppers can pull off. The blue one is the better of the 2.

Dudee · 03-23-2005, 01:20 PM

i dont get what you guys are saying

GaZ · 03-23-2005, 01:24 PM

look at your doorlines, there are 3 there mate 1 then the curved one with the vent style and then the back far one meaning it has 3 openings, understand what i mean?

Dudee · 03-23-2005, 01:51 PM

no i dont quite understand if you talking about the door crease on the side vent i made it slighly to the left of the cars original door crease then the vent can have a 3D form to it

GaZ · 03-23-2005, 02:07 PM

thats what we mean

BreeZ · 03-23-2005, 02:26 PM

Gaz, i just taked 2 dudee (he's the one that showed me this site nd now im hooked) he sez that the middle line by the vent is where it wuz put on , it's not a door.

Dudee · 03-23-2005, 03:00 PM

i finnally fixed all that door dillema, just tell me if you find anymore problems

suzq044 · 03-23-2005, 04:23 PM

i see 2 seperate doors with dimension from the folded material, i see 2 doors; there's no problem there; I liked that concept better than the coupe version which you have updated us with. not bad though