Eclipse Spyder toon

[Kyalistas]

K so the other day I decided to try and toon a car.

Original:






Final:


So I don't think it's terrible, but I got kinda lazy with painting it an what not.

C&C very welcome.

Thanks,
Kyalistas

[PSDavinci]

The lines are a bit thick especially the outer line.
I think it would look better if you darken the shadow under the car.
Not bad tho bro.

[Kyalistas]

alright will do. thanks

[illusionest]

that looks cute, i like it

good job!

[suzq044]

with tooning -- try one pixel lines & at most a 5 pixel outline... i'll show you what i mean when i get home from work today.

[white_lancer]

yeh the lines are way too thick and i assume u left out the shading on purpose? but since there is no real shading the thick lines make it look like it should be in a comic lol its nice for waht it is though. keep at it! and dont be afraid to experiment

[Kyalistas]

Thanks for all the advice. Like I said yeah I got lazy on the painting and just gave it a solid color but I'll change it around as soon as i get the time to. And Suz glad you're willing to help. I look forward to seeing it