my chop on civic

mostafa_tommy2002 · 03-21-2009, 04:47 AM

my chop on Honda civic :

real one :

photo shop one :

Troy-M · 03-21-2009, 04:56 AM

* green outlining the car
* white on the front wheel
* front body kit jaged lines and non colord circle
* drivers head is squished
* carbon is to big

i like the decal, wheels and side vents

fattack · 03-21-2009, 06:00 AM

i think troy got most of it lol. this is a good attempt and some nice ideas the execution just needs work the whole thing seems very low res after all the smudging thats been done.

the wheels are a great choice!!!!!

the lights are a bit low res and the paint seems saturated to me

BUT KEEP AT IT

looking foward to your next one

IgorDesign · 03-21-2009, 06:36 AM

This chop has mistakes, but you're getting better and better.
I think this is your best chop so far.
Just keep practicing.

blackace · 03-21-2009, 08:35 AM

I really like the ideas of this chop but ya need to work on the exuction of them and as Igor said keep practising

chris42344 · 03-24-2009, 04:36 PM

man you suck i think you should practice before you post

S_I_N_i_C · 03-24-2009, 05:09 PM

post elsewhere if your going to be a di*k.
and if you insist on bieng a dic*, then give some tips
c+c= constructive criticism
Criticism of Criticism

Notable scholars of the Post-Structuralist tradition have often emphasized the self referential nature of all criticism. Stanley Fish argues that all interpretations are subjective projections and have no inherent meaning; therefore, the critic undermines himself for he undermines only his own interpretation. Thus, concludes Fish, all criticism is self criticism.

IgorDesign · 03-25-2009, 10:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chris42344

man you suck i think you should practice before you post

Don't be rude like this.
If you don't like his work explain why you don't like it and give him some pointer in fixing the mistakes, because after all we are all here to get advices and pointers so we can get better and better.
And he should post while he's still learning so we can help him and let him know what we think about it.
I whish I knew about this forum when I first started choping, so I would get advices from chopers who are in this line of work longer than I am.

Peace.