Neon

[ViRuS]

well here is my first toon,

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C&C welcome,

What do you use, Line or Pen tool :huh:

[hav_lova]

like i said before nice but u neeed to make smaller lines

[BlackJetta]

that looks like the right size lines to me .... just with the front part
you need to be sutre to get the outside And the inside lip part of the grill area .. if not . it just looks like you slapped on a rectangle ... Verry good 1st try though .. got to admit

[hynt]

you need to make smaller lines because its kinda jagged, but it looks cool

[rickysals]

Originally posted by BlackJetta@Apr 6 2004, 04:48 PM
that looks like the right size lines to me .... just with the front part
you need to be sutre to get the outside And the inside lip part of the grill area .. if not . it just looks like you slapped on a rectangle ... Verry good 1st try though .. got to admit

he meant length, not width

[ViRuS]

thnx for the comments

[hav_lova]

Originally posted by bigrick+Apr 6 2004, 05:41 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bigrick @ Apr 6 2004, 05:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin--BlackJetta@Apr 6 2004, 04:48 PM
that looks like the right size lines to me .... just with the front part
you need to be sutre to get the outside And the inside lip part of the grill area .. if not . it just looks like you slapped on a rectangle ... Verry good 1st try though .. got to admit

he meant length, not width[/b][/quote]
yes he is making them too long for thing to look round

[360GTC]

i gotta question about your cartoon hourani, when you did it, did it make every line a new layer cuz when i made one-the red viper in this section-it did. i went to a turtorial and tried to fix it but i couldnt-just wondering if this happend for you but otherwise nice cartoon-jsut give it a paintjob lol