my Third try BMW 635D

[lowkey]

wow 2 wip's a day....but minor changes only T_T
here's da org

here's what i can do so far
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and again please comment from da seniors Mr Moncef,reckoners,etc

nb: i have look all over da forums. all of stjoseph 1903's werk are awesome....it thrills me 0_o

[Reckoner]

I scrolled down the page and saw some people never got help with their WIPS. I haven't seen this one in the auto chops section so what the hay! I kinda like the color lol! The wheels are WAY too big. Make them a little smaller. Also the spoiler is a little low quality. Keep at it man!!

[lowkey]

thx again bro. u'r comment helps me alot ^^

i like big rims, but end up in making them bigger then they supposed 2 be T_T

[Moncef]

Lol we're not really seniors. I haven't done a chop in so long and I've only been on the board for like a year or so. Compared to the people who had been with this site since the beginning, I'm still a noob lol.

The sky looks awesome. I love doing things like that, modding the background. Helps the car a lot.
The bodywork looks pretty good, but the spoiler strikes me as odd. You should take more time on your selections around the car, do you know how to use the pen tool? The poly lasso works fine, as long as you're very meticulous with it. Always feather the selection at 1px to make it smoother BTW. Yeah, I think the rims are too big as well. But this shows some improvement, the overall effect is pretty good IMO.

Keep working!

-Moncef