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Old 09-29-2008, 02:46 PM   #1
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So I decided to return doing Photoshoping after a long break mostly because lack of inspiration. But I have Returned with a new car completly went out of concepts because I was not ready for that I realize now. So Here its. Rims Are from a new Lexus and the paint and Lambo Door Done Myself. I know Its needs some touchup work and etc but please help and make this better by suggesting and for sure explaining something. For example if you want there to reflections tell me how and where. Anyways thanks for looking and enjoy or not lol

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Old 09-29-2008, 02:54 PM   #2
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I hate the paint job... the door has the depth but looks too quickly done... cut off the window thingy... and rotate the door more and c+p grass and rotate it to be equal to the rotated door.. I realy hate this paint job
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Old 09-29-2008, 08:57 PM   #3
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First of what would you suggest for a paint job then? saying you hate it doesnt help me lol. I dont know what you mean by Window thingy either? You mean the Side Mirror on the door? alsoWhat you mean by C+P grass and Rotating it to match the door? you mean as a reflection or what? try to be more specific with what your trying to explain please, itll only better this chop more if I get specifics to the most possible. Some Veterans might know what your talking about right away but im still very new to this but thanks for the input ill do what I can to improve those points I understood.
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Old 09-30-2008, 10:09 PM   #4
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first off, the color is too dark, it hides details, try dodging the highlights...
also, theres still some red at the bottom of the front bumper, and your car is oversaturated
the other car parts, headlights, windshield, tires, etc.
should all have a dark hint to them the blue stands out too much
the window thingy he means is the window support on the back of the door, i think...
(nobody can really understand what he says....)
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Old 10-02-2008, 02:13 PM   #5
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Changed Colour Combo and Darken Parts along. no Mirror on Door because I thought it looked weird and Window tinted the windshield and Back window. Dont know how to brush a Scissor door Support so I havent done that yet. Tell me what you think and suggestions thanks

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Old 10-07-2008, 01:54 PM   #6
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Old 10-07-2008, 01:59 PM   #7
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I think its a good chop but the car is too dark for its surroundings. One thing you could do is lighten the car or even darken the surroundings and switch the headlights on... or you could ignore my comment! good chop though
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Old 10-08-2008, 12:29 PM   #8
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Very good, you have left the reflection from where the wing mirror was though. Rather than adjusting the background or car to match the background I would find one that suits it a bit better, seems like a moody car could do with a moody background?
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Yeah. good idea
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Ya ill probably do that. ill find a night background in the city or somewhere but if you guys have any post it otherwise ill update soon.
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Changed Background and some of the lighting effects
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Old 10-23-2008, 02:24 PM   #13
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love that bak ground man the car fits good but imo were the car is 2 toned i think u shud make the whole front bumper black only imo is this one of your firsy chops or not ??
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That background is a lot better. I agree with megaman - the bumper would look better all black
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This is my 2 chop. First was my failed attempt at a dodge charger concept lol ill change the bumper issue but anything else? thanks for the feedback
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Your car looks okay around the rocks, but it's way to light compared to the dark backdrop. It's good for a second chop, your just missing some minor things here and there. It will all come to you as you carry out more chops.
Other things: Shadow under the front kit looks to light, and shadow under the skirt and rear are really dark. And your missing the shadow under the rear tire. Rear rim shouldnt be that shiny (with the backdrop). The seats showing under the scissor doors should be darker. Almost every thing should be darker now because of the background change. Try dding the rock reflections on the front windshield, between the headlights and anywhere else that you see trees change it to rocks. You need something on the scissor door. Doesn't look right. Needs reflections or a light to dark gradient... something. Also need shadows on the body behind the raised door. If you still don't understand let me know.
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Yeah I agree with most comments but totally disagree on the background choice.
Theres too much black in the picture.
The big overhang should clearly be evident in the reflection as close as it seems to be to it.
Also, never, never, never put things (in this case rocks) in the foreground!
You want the car to be the focal point and this really is a major distraction.
You also have a no depth of field.
The rocks in the foreground are clearly in focus as well as those in the background.
Totally screws the realism.
I like the car and for me I would look for a suitable sunset beach BG.
Goes to show how important and difficult things can be when swapping scenery.
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the door is too jagged and you can see the extra bit past the actual door line
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